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OverScheme Chapter 1

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Over Scheme
Chapter-1
Narrated by Sarah

I’m just a 14 year old freshman in high school, my name is Sarah Edema, and along with my best friends Leah Harkens, and Denise Leaf we take on our first year at Dentine Valley high.

“Leah! Time to go! C’mon!”  I appear … mature for my age, and I’m the tallest of the three amigos.  “Hold on hold on… LEON! GIVE ME MY STUFF! I GOTTA GO!” Leon, Leah’s older Senior brother, is the class president, and can basically do anything he wants. But all he really seems to do is make Leah’s life a living hell. The front door opened revealing Leah and her trademark pink bunny book bag, regardless of the teasing she says she’ll never throw it out, and her customized item that the school allows, which is the large waist band and bow from a kimono. The school has uniforms, but only allows one modification, or major accessory added.

“Lets go get Denise… knowing her she’s still asleep.” Leah said.  Denise isn’t the most beautiful girl in school, but her creativity and imagination rivals none. “Denise! Let’s go! Schools a waiting!!!” Leah yells in her window. “Im… ready…” Denise said groggily stepping out of her room into the hallway, her shirt was badly buttoned, which made it uneven, showing off a bit of her bra, and her hair was a mess!

“Denise what are we going to do with you!” I push her back in her room, and we help her get around. “Dena-Chan~” Kayla, Denise’s little sister said with a yawn approaching, while clutching her favorite stuffed animal fox. “Go back to bed Kay Kay, we gotta go to school, and you don’t need to be up for a few more hours.” Denise, now awake said and guided the munchkin back to her room.

The school was relatively close so all we had to do was get each other around and head off. There was a sort of high pitched gurgle sound. “Hey! Marco! How did you get in my bag?” I said pulling the lizard out. “You are supposed to stay home.” I shook my finger at him. He acknowledged by lowering his head. I sat him down and pointed at my house, the gecko scurried off in that direction. “We all have our own little problems, don’t we? Hehehe” I said. “Marco just loves being with you, he’s like your guardian angel… or in this case guardian gecko.” Denise said. “Yeah…”

Dentine Valley is quite really the smallest town in the state. We three all know everyone that lives here really well. Now... whether or not we get along is a different matter. Our school also gets kids from the near by city. Like they couldn’t have there own high school…  They are the ones that cause the most problems.

We made it to the school, and it’s HUGE! Quite easily fit the entire town in its auditorium alone, and its got 4 floors! Makes you wonder how a simple townie like Leon made president.


“This years Vice President… BRIAN KREEDON!” The announcements made my knees buckle and slump onto the floor. I’ve always had a crush on Brian, but with Janett Darion always playing bodyguard, while trying to make a relationship with him it makes asking him anything out of the question… ‘Queenie’ must have a weakness of some kind.

Leah bumps into Jake, “Hey!” Leah says, Jake just turns and smiles. “Leah…. Leah! You’re blushing!” she turns forward, and puts her face in her palms. “S-shut up!”  We laughed at her dismay for falling for the bad boy. “This is where I bid ye’ all a due.” Denise broke away from the group to go to art. Where she likes to chat with Travis. Or the school hippy. Travis is the artistic genius of the school, capable of attaining any girl he wishes, but he’s into personality more than brainless physical relationships. His only enemies are the guys who envy his ability. Travis and Denise are the only ones in our collection who seem to have a possible relationship budding.

A massive football player walks down the hallway, yelling “Hey! Bry!”
And a girl that looks like she’s been around the block a couple hundred times turns around, and makes out with the hulk. It disgusts me to see what some women would do just to get a relationship. “How many times do you think she’s had him?” asks Leah.
“Jeez, I can’t tell… all of her previous ones hide it” I snicker.

“Listen I gotta go, ill talk to you later ‘k Sarah?”
“All right, ill get ya at lunch.”
“See ya!”

I continued down the hall, and Kate meets up with me. “Hiya! How are you doing?” she asks. “Oh! Hey, not much, still hanging on?”
“Shhhh! I told you not in public! If it gets out, then I might as well be dead!”
“ill take it as a yes” I said. Kate is more a friend / psychiatrist friend. She’s always got an idea of what a problem is and how to fix it. But the real deal is, Kate is really Kyle. He’s trangendered in the final stages, and im the only one he’s told. As far as everyone else is concerned she’s a girl who likes to help with life issues. That’s why she moved here last year, at her old school, she was Kyle, and everyone knew him as a guy, and he couldn’t become Kate without erasing his past. “All right, ill see you at lunch won’t I?” “Yeah! Of course!”


Our school is strange to say the least. And its only our freshman year.

<Author Note: the story from this point on will be narrated by Pique the mouse.>




Hello! Sorry im late in the story. I’m Pique, yes, the mouse. I’ll guide you through these three girl’s lives for the length of the tale. Any who, down to business.

“Denise, I love your creativity and style! You always open up so many new ideas and views that inspire my art.” Travis said as Denise sat beside him. “Awe, thank you Travis.” She blushed a bit. “What are you working on today?” she asks. “Well, like yesterday, you mentioned its good for any artist to have an incomplete work of art, like the Mona Lisa right? Well, im going to continuously work on this picture for as long as possible. I want to perfect my anatomy, and proportions.” He exclaimed. “That’s good, just don’t forget your other stuff, I mean draw more than just one picture.”  She replied.
“I know, im not just going to continuously draw JUST this, that would get boring to quickly and would result in artist block.”

Sarah’s first period class is History, which luckily she has interest in. “What was the Holocaust?” asks the teacher. Sarah’s hand is the first up, and she goes into detail on the effects of the Holocaust, and the Jewish, when the teacher cuts her off. “You always know the answer; I just don’t see why you come to this class if you already know everything!” the teacher jokes. “Hehehe, sorry! Ill let everyone else answer now..” She sat her head on the desk and started to doze off when Ben pokes her.” You may know everything, but you should stay awake just incase you miss something.” He smiled at her.
“Thanks, I didn’t mean to doze…”

It’s in Leah’s blood to do something official, so the first few periods of the school day is volunteering in the office, helping secretaries organize, and summoning kids for messages, or conferences with teachers. That job’s usually reserved for upperclassmen, but Leah has connections. “Here Leah, we need you to get Jake Spaldin, he’s in room 340 right now.” Said the secretary. Leah jumped to attention. “Y-yes ma’am!” she took the notice and the express pass (a clip board with “hall pass” written in black permanent ink).
She tingled with excitement as she walked down the hallway.  She’s nervous; I can tell by the way she’s walking, instead of in a straight line she’s waving down the hall. “Umm… Excuse me, I need Jake.” She said innocently. The classroom was like a detention room. The supervisor woke up, and motioned Jake and Leah away. “So, whats the problem now…?” Jake asks Leah.  She went to speak but words didn’t form, so after several attempts she handed him the message slip.  “Ah… the principal wants to strike a deal. Lead the way… Leah” Heh, its fun watching girls melt when there crushes talk to them. She collapsed in the hall. Jake re-woke the supervisor, and they took her to the nurse.

Lunch time rolled around, my favorite period as well, you see I blend well against the gray floor tiles. “I fainted…” Leah said out of the blue. “What? Why?” Kate asked indignantly. “You know! I have the worst crush on him. ~sigh~” “Leah, your hopeless.” Sarah said. “You should talk; your knees get weak just at the mention of Brian.” Leah countered. “You’re both pitiful; I can at least talk with my crush.” Denise said. “AH HA! So you admit it!” Leah exclaims. “Fine. I admit it. Dork” they all laugh. Ω

<Chapter 2>
Enjoy people!
yes i know i switch narrators, but I'm sticking with pique from this point onward.
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Timarius's avatar
Honestly, that's one wacky school and it sounds like something that could actually happen, minus the narrator mouse.

*Points at the talking mouse* OH SHIT?! *Kicks it in the groin and sends it flying*

... Sorry, I watched Epic Movie yesterday... and its retarded humor reminded me of someone.

So now I give you a thumbs up. *Thumbs up* Good job! X3